By Kimberly Johnson
Full disclosure--Maggie Smith’s acting is the reason why I
watched Downton Abbey. The acclaimed actress plays Violet
Crawley, Dowager Countess of Grantham, in the PBS period drama. Smith dispenses
stinging sarcasm to her cast mates better than an angry honeybee attacking a
brown bear raiding its honey tree.
Here’s proof:
Lady Grantham (Smith): “You are quite
wonderful the way you see room for improvement wherever you look. I never knew
such reforming zeal.”
Mrs. Crawley (Penelope Wilton): “I take that
as a compliment.”
Lady Grantham: “I must have
said it wrong.”
Here’s more proof:
Mrs. Crawley:
“What should we call each other?”
Lady Grantham:“Well, we could always start with Mrs. Crawley and Lady Grantham."
Lady Grantham:“Well, we could always start with Mrs. Crawley and Lady Grantham."
I take my fedora off to writer and creator Julian Fellowes for
his interplay of mockery and cynicism in keeping the dialogue so fresh and so
uniquely British. The finest scenes are when the Dowager and Lady
Crawley trade barbs. I think that sarcasm bridges the gap between
the two spirited women who have nothing in common, yet have to get along for the
sake of the family. Fellowes uses the confrontations to create
tension which is a great way to construct conflict.
With this in mind, I researched how a writer can use ironic or
satirical remarks as a writing device to lure readers into his text.
I found blogger David Hartstein of Wired Impact. He
blogged a satirical post that received mixed reactions—mostly negative.
He concluded:
#1: Writing sarcasm to an audience that doesn’t know you
personally will probably fall flat. Focus on the message that you
want to deliver to the reader.
#2: Sarcasm is in the delivery, according to
Hartstein. “It’s about
your inflection and emphasis. This requires a bit
of extra thought when you’re trying to convey it in writing.” Use
bolded words and italics for emphasis.
#3: Sarcasm is in the eye of the beholder and
someone may take offense to it. Hartstein adds, “In fact, chances
are you’ll come across as a jerk. The feeling of it being something
of an inside joke is actually what makes sarcasm worthwhile. You
just have to craft your delivery to make as many people feel like insiders as is
possible.”
I wonder does Julian Fellowes go through the same
thing.
Hi Kimberly. Thanks a lot for referencing my post on sarcastic writing. I definitely didn't expect my satirical post to get the sort of reception it did, which led me to reflect a lot on the execution of satire, especially in writing.
ReplyDeleteYour post is interesting and refreshed a lot of my original self-explorations on the topic. Thanks again for sharing.